Thursday, July 26

White Water Rafting

Splash! My raft is now in the water. “Here comes some rapids!” Our helper Bones said. “Forward paddle” he said. Heaps of water flew at my face. Finally it was over. I was glad I didn't fall of. “Stop!” Bones yelled. We could here the Chinchillas yelling “one two , one two.”Then we saw a group stop. We tried to compute why they stopped. So we stopped.One of the instructors called Dion got a group to river cross. He said “Biggest person at the front smallest at the back.”Then it was our turn.I was at the back because I was the smallest. “Forward” Bones said. He kept on repeating it until he said “back”. After that, we got back in the raft and started rafting. Then we saw a group crash into Carnage Corner. “Forward paddle!” Bones yelled. We were heading straight into Carnage Corner. “Hold on!” Bones shouted. I griped on as fast as I could. BANG! I was flung in the air. A couple of hours later we saw a team stop for lunch. The instructor of that team said “ For lunch we are having sandwiches and water melon.” After lunch we saw a waterfall. “Wow,” everyone in my group said. “Here comes some rapids” bones bellowed. “I’m going to make more fun,” Bones exclaimed “left forward right back!”. That made us start to spin. “Woooooooh!” everyone shouted. “Hey look its a whirlpool,”Bones said. “weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,” That was fun I said to myself. A couple of minutes later we were in this pond thingy. We saw other groups doing some wheelys. Then after that we stopped our journey.

5 comments:

  1. Great Kharn. I like the speech marks you put in your writing. Great work!

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  2. Wow kharn
    Awesome I really like how you mentioned the Chinchillas because i was in that group :) What was your highlight of camp mountain valley

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    1. My favourite part was the amazing race because I watch the TV program lots. I also liked the archery because it is my favourite sport.
      Thanks!

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  3. mind blowing kharn you tried hard keep it up.

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  4. Amazing Karn!
    The writing is so Amazing I love this. Then we saw a group crash into Carnage Corner. “Forward paddle!” Bones yelled.
    Amazing writing.
    Well done. :D

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