Today we have been making our own ending for Margaret Mahy's The Great White Man-Eating Shark. Here is mine.
“Help shark, shark!” Mrs Scorpio yelled.
Then under water the rare sticky grey ink squid came and squirted grey sticky ink all over Norvin.
“Yuck!” he said as the ink went all over him.
Above the water Mr Leo passed Mrs Scorpio a frying pan and Mrs Scorpio banged Norvin in the head.
Back at Mrs Scorpio’s bakery Mr Leo asked Mrs Scorpio if she had any new pie flavours.
“Yes!” She replied “It’s called shark pie!”.
The end.
In memory of Margaret Mahy 1936-2012.
Cool Kharn!
ReplyDeleteI like your ending, its very different. It's really funny too. Well done!
This is a great post Kharn
ReplyDeleteI liked the bit is where you said
Back at Mrs Scorpio’s bakery Mr Leo asked Mrs Scorpio if she had any new pie flavours.
“Yes!” She replied “It’s called shark pie!”.
Great ending Kharn I liked the very ending where Mr leo asked Mrs Scorpio if she had a any new pie flavours and she said shark pie.
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